Honestly I liked that you didn't use pictures, it helped us to focus on you and what you were actually trying to say. Good job not just reading from a card.
Trevor: It was cool how you had a reason to not have a presentation. I like how you were engaged in the audience. Eye contact could've improved but I love how you had the theme of change.
Trevor, I liked how you did it differently, similar to a TED talk. You were very confident and calm up there. I liked your stories and you did a great job
gave a different speech from everyone else and was confident doing it. Thought he could have rehearsed his speech a little more. but it was heart felt and had meaning to it. shared deep family issues. GREAT JOB TREV!! YOU THE MAN
An interesting take on the presentation. Your choice not to have pictures made the listeners pay attention to what you were saying, an stronger impact. Your movements were kind of distracting from the presentation.
I really like how you talked with your hands and moved around. You kept us really engaged and listening by your talking, I like that you didn't need pictures.
Way to pace, and using your hands, this added to your speech. YOU not having pictures behind you did make your speech better, because sometimes, people will focus on your pictures more than what you were actually saying. Great job.
I like how you talked about change through the whole presentation. You were super easy to focus on with a clear confident voice. Your stories were very personal but made your presentation that much better, good job sharing and being open with the class.
Standing closer to the audience than most presenters gave and instant positive and confident feeling for the lecture. Not providing images and slides to reference from was interesting, yet because you didn't want anyone to be distracted from what you trying to convey gave larger, impressive stance.
even though you didn't have a presentation you did a good job getting your message across to your audience. Your personality came across very strong and it was good to see that you were not afraid to tell a personal story.
I loved how you didn't use any pictures. It seemed crazy at first but it really worked for you. You spoke exactly like a professional speaker! I liked how confident you were and honest. I think your speech was the best overall.
I like how you choose not to use pictures or anything but yourself to explain your life. I also liked how you used change to explain yourself and your life.
Trevor - I love how personal your presentation was. you were so honest and so willing to share. I liked how you didn't need to have a PowerPoint but were confident in what you were saying. Great job!
Good job telling a story, you had solid points and ideas and i liked how you moved around.It kept the crowd enthused. You created a good sense of vulnerability which made it easier for me to connect with you. One thing to work on in possibly making eye contact with the crowd more, you looked at the floor for about 60% of you presentation. But other than that nice job.
I could tell you were really relaxed and comfortable giving your speech. Great job, I like how you went about your theme. You got into some really vulnerable topics, and gave a great presentation.
Your shirt is a nice color. The contrast between your definition and the dictionary was a cool touch. You shared such a personal stories, which must've been a hard thing to do. Hopefully now you're growing as a person!
Trevor, I like your idea about presentation being a distraction to what your trying to tell. Your change theme was awesome and I like the way you would accept change and embrace it. Your story was very good!
Trevor, to begin I loved how professionally you looked and I loved how you didn't have a presentation it made your speech unique as well as special. I liked how you used definitions of the word that really meant the most to you in your life. I also liked how you put truly personal information into your speech it really made me see the real you. Next time just try not to walk around as much.
I really respect you for opening up in front of the class and showing how you are learning from the mistakes you made in the past and putting them behind you! People can change and I really encourage you to do the best you can at everything and I'm sure you will develop into a very good man.
I liked your intro it was a good attention grabber. It was well rehearsed. It was awesome to hear more of your life story. Try to stand still more. Overall very well done
Honestly I liked that you didn't use pictures, it helped us to focus on you and what you were actually trying to say. Good job not just reading from a card.
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ReplyDeleteIt was cool how you had a reason to not have a presentation. I like how you were engaged in the audience. Eye contact could've improved but I love how you had the theme of change.
You spoke very well and very confident! Great life lessons and the connection to change
ReplyDeleteTrevor, I liked how you did it differently, similar to a TED talk. You were very confident and calm up there. I liked your stories and you did a great job
ReplyDeleteNot having a slide show did make me focus on what you were saying more! Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou seemed very confident and comfortable in what you were talking about, very genuine.
ReplyDeletegave a different speech from everyone else and was confident doing it. Thought he could have rehearsed his speech a little more. but it was heart felt and had meaning to it. shared deep family issues. GREAT JOB TREV!! YOU THE MAN
ReplyDeleteAn interesting take on the presentation. Your choice not to have pictures made the listeners pay attention to what you were saying, an stronger impact. Your movements were kind of distracting from the presentation.
ReplyDeleteTrevor, you did well not having a presentation, it engaged you in the audience but you could of had better eye contact but good job
ReplyDeleteI really like how you talked with your hands and moved around. You kept us really engaged and listening by your talking, I like that you didn't need pictures.
ReplyDeleteWay to pace, and using your hands, this added to your speech. YOU not having pictures behind you did make your speech better, because sometimes, people will focus on your pictures more than what you were actually saying. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI like how you talked about change through the whole presentation. You were super easy to focus on with a clear confident voice. Your stories were very personal but made your presentation that much better, good job sharing and being open with the class.
ReplyDeleteStanding closer to the audience than most presenters gave and instant positive and confident feeling for the lecture. Not providing images and slides to reference from was interesting, yet because you didn't want anyone to be distracted from what you trying to convey gave larger, impressive stance.
ReplyDeleteeven though you didn't have a presentation you did a good job getting your message across to your audience. Your personality came across very strong and it was good to see that you were not afraid to tell a personal story.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you didn't use any pictures. It seemed crazy at first but it really worked for you. You spoke exactly like a professional speaker! I liked how confident you were and honest. I think your speech was the best overall.
ReplyDeleteI like how you choose not to use pictures or anything but yourself to explain your life. I also liked how you used change to explain yourself and your life.
ReplyDeleteTrevor - I love how personal your presentation was. you were so honest and so willing to share. I liked how you didn't need to have a PowerPoint but were confident in what you were saying. Great job!
ReplyDeleteTrevor i agree with you 100% change for the most part is a good thing. Good job presenting it.
ReplyDeleteGood job telling a story, you had solid points and ideas and i liked how you moved around.It kept the crowd enthused. You created a good sense of vulnerability which made it easier for me to connect with you. One thing to work on in possibly making eye contact with the crowd more, you looked at the floor for about 60% of you presentation. But other than that nice job.
ReplyDeleteI could tell you were really relaxed and comfortable giving your speech. Great job, I like how you went about your theme. You got into some really vulnerable topics, and gave a great presentation.
ReplyDeleteIt was very deep and I liked you delivered it differently then everyone else. You could tell it was very personal which is a great touch!
ReplyDeleteYour shirt is a nice color. The contrast between your definition and the dictionary was a cool touch. You shared such a personal stories, which must've been a hard thing to do. Hopefully now you're growing as a person!
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ReplyDeleteI like your idea about presentation being a distraction to what your trying to tell. Your change theme was awesome and I like the way you would accept change and embrace it. Your story was very good!
Trevor, to begin I loved how professionally you looked and I loved how you didn't have a presentation it made your speech unique as well as special. I liked how you used definitions of the word that really meant the most to you in your life. I also liked how you put truly personal information into your speech it really made me see the real you. Next time just try not to walk around as much.
ReplyDeleteI really respect you for opening up in front of the class and showing how you are learning from the mistakes you made in the past and putting them behind you! People can change and I really encourage you to do the best you can at everything and I'm sure you will develop into a very good man.
ReplyDeleteI liked your intro it was a good attention grabber. It was well rehearsed. It was awesome to hear more of your life story. Try to stand still more. Overall very well done
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