I loved that you went a different route with your presentation! Very interesting and fun to listen to
Way to mix it up on the speech, I liked how you mixed in your manifesto within your entire speech. Good strories that tie into the manifesto. Try to slow down a little, you are talking a little to fast.
Jon:I loved your different approach to it, with the manifesto quote. You seemed very well prepared and really thought it out. It's really inspiring how you've continued to push yourself until you achieved your goal. Good luck at state!
I like how you mixed it up a little bit by going off your manifesto. Don't talk so fast and take your time. However I did like to hear your life stories and I enjoyed learning more about your life
Jon, good presentation! I like how you did yours a little different, and based the whole thing off of your manifesto.
Jon,I liked the way you started with your manifesto and it got me interested right away. I loved the way you talked about how you improved with something you liked to do and you stuck with it to improve.
I liked how you used your manifesto as the back bone of your presentation. I would like to see some pictures to solidify the stories you were telling about your childhood.
wore professional attire and had a good speech. he did stutter and seemed like he was nervous or didn't rehearse it too well. He was trying hard but i think some notecards would have helped. as the speech progressed so did Jon's abilities at giving public speeches.
I like how you did it differently. You had good body language and delivery, but seemed a little nervous. I liked hearing about your improvement over the years
Jon - I liked the way you stared with the manifesto and the way your stories! I liked your deep thought and how you so easily shared your story
I like how you did yours differently than everyone else! All of your quotes seemed really important to you which was really cool. Even though you didn't have pictures I could still picture your stories.
I loved how your presentation was so different from everyone elses. You were really confident and had great eye contact! I loved all your stories and your presentation worked very well together!
Jon, I like how you started with your manifesto instead of at the end of the presentation. I had no idea that you had speech problems when you were little and it was interesting to learn about. I also like the fact that you really put yourself into the story that you were told it made it sound more like story than a speech. Next time I just recommend that you use more visuals and move a little less.
I like the messages you gave through your speech. You are like a noble explorer, taking advantage of every waking moment.
Great job memorizing the stories in your speech. I really liked how you really connected your manifesto into it.
Interesting way of switching things up! was enjoying how you added in your manifesto with your entire presentation.
Way to do things differently than everybody else. You delivered your speech very well and your body language is excellent. Your stories were a great addition to your manifesto and your speech in general.
I learned a lot more about Jon in a way that was different and creative, he really separated himself in a positive way. From his manifesto, he modestly branched off stories that he took away lessons throughout his life.
Good job, i liked how you did your presentation differently then everyone else.
I liked how you used the manifesto first and you explained some of the quotes and although you only had one slide you made it work very well.
You really did a good job of showing the perseverance that you developed during high school and how you wanted to show everybody that everything is possible.
Jon, I like how you did yours differently than everyone else. It made it individual to you! I like how you go through growing up and how it connects to your manifesto. Good job making eye contact!
Nice presentation. Good eye contact and you looked comfortable up in front of the class.