did not wear professional attire. Rehearsed his speech okay, could have been better tho. did a good job telling his story. Hope you have a succesful military career.
I like that you used the idea of failure in your last lecture, but came back from that by stepping it up in your life.
Speech was somewhat hard to hear, yet your personality did come through when you continued to reveal yourself through the presentation. I really liked how you could admit failure yet knew they helped make the "product" of who you are.
Patrick:I liked your thesis! I can't of struggled to understand you. I loved the ideas that you got across. I like your confidence. Good luck with your future next year and thank you for your service!
I like your main thesis. Your baseball story is one that I'm sure lots of people can relate to. It's cool how you've known what you wanted to do for so long, and that you worked towards it.
I like that you weren't afraid to share your story and give your experiences so far in your life.
Patrick - I liked how you presented your story. I liked how you have a dream and are chasing it and why. Good job!
It was cool to learn more about your competitions and life. Good luck in your journey in the navy and thank you for serving our country
Patrick, I think it is really cool that you are going into the navy and doing what you are gonna do. Good luck in that and your presentation was really good
I Like how you didn't put you life on hold just because you got cut from the team you. You thought about what you could do to make you dream to be a navy seal
Speech was at a perfect sound level. Your clarity was excellent. I love how you used failure into your speech. You had great confidence and didn't seem nervous at all.
Good job, I liked the stories about cross fit. I respect your decision to join the Navy.
Pat,Great eye contact throughout your presentation. I like your story of how your didn't like sports to much and how you started to train very hard and you accomplished great things. Good luck in the future and great job!
Love how you used failure as motivation to come back and succeed to win!
Patrick, I liked all the visuals you used and how the story fit along with them. I would have liked to hear more about your childhood in the way you grew up. I loved how you talked about crossfit and how it really effected your life. It really was interesting to hear how this one experience changed the way you thought about your life. I liked the manifesto and how it really reflected your story. Next time I just recommend that you dress more professionally. Good luck and be safe in the Navy!
Nice job. Very organized and well thought out. you looked confident and i liked how you talked with your hands.Good quotes.
Thank you for your future service in the Navy and I wish you the best.
Good job. I like how you used your experience of getting cut from the baseball team, to help you find out what you wanted to do with your life and really make the best out of your situation.
I admire your dedication to your passions. You are like a brave warrior, marching into battle.
I enjoyed the story of your life you told. I thought you could have put more emphases on what you were saying.
Good job telling your life stories and how you have failed and been successful so far. At a few points you were a little hard to hear. Good luck next year and than you for everything you are doing for our country!
I really like it! The only thing is maybe add more emotion next time like when you talk about winning get excited! But it was given really well!
I really liked how you connected your quotes from your manifesto back into your speech!