I loved how creative your presentation was. When you spoke I liked how you only glanced at your note cards while still making eye contact with the class.
Caro: I loved the creativity that you brought to the presentation. I would've liked to see some pictures from your past that applied to your life but I still liked your approach. It seemed a bit rushed though, I wish you had told more stories.
You have a very imaginative slideshow. Your theme is very fitting to you, and you included nice quotes throughout as well. You had some funny tidbits, and it added character to the presentation!
Caro - I liked your presentation. I liked the main theme of imagination. I would just work on not reading off your note card and looking at your audience more.
Caroline's words sounded very automatic, as if her her notes where presenting, not her. She took an interesting route, though, when she was the first to include pictures that imaged a artistic view of she had to say, standing out even though I wanted to see more pictures from her life.
You did a nice job of showing how your imagination helped you get through life. I like the way you explained that the imagination can help people get through life.
Great job, I really enjoyed your speech. You covered everything really well and I enjoyed listening to your talk. You have a great story. You really mixed it up and gave a new perspective. Though I would suggest not using a note card as much.
Caro, Your idea of imagination is awesome and I loved it. You kept your head down most of the time at your cards and would like more eye contact. Your speech was very good however and you did a great job.
I loved that you chose imagination. It was a great new outlook on life and something that everyone could relate on! Maybe next time make more eye contact, but it was great!
Caro, your presentation is very you. Imagination is definitely the theme for your life. Good job on the delivery and posture, but make more eye contact
I liked the message of imagination through your speech. It felt as though the speech was kind of scripted, though, like a humble newscaster reading their morning news teleprompter.
Caro, Other than eye contact you should speak more from within and not read off notecards, this speech should be kind of improvised so that you're not reading cards but you still got your point across in your quotes. I like what you said about peoples imaginations and how no one can have too many friends.
I love how you talk about imagination. I think people forget all the time that imagination is as important as knowledge. I think you have spent more time on your childhood and how that influences you now.
Caro, I absolutely loved your stories behind the theme of imagination. You got a very strong message across through your idea of what your lasting legacy will be. Short but to the point, and very inspirational.
Caro, I loved the name of your last lecture and how it began with a riddle. The running theme of imagination really tided your last lecture together as a whole. I think that your legacy to others is something that truly has come true in life for I know you have inspired me in quite a few ways. Next time I just recommend that you fake it till you make it if you mess up because no one knows but you!
The riddle that you began with was very interesting, and I like how that led into the rest of you presentation.I thought you had a very cool theme, and I like how your imagination is a big part of what shaped your personality. Great presentation.
Really nice job tying your theme in throughout the presentation. I liked the advice and stories you shared.
ReplyDeleteI loved how creative your presentation was. When you spoke I liked how you only glanced at your note cards while still making eye contact with the class.
ReplyDeleteCaro:
ReplyDeleteI loved the creativity that you brought to the presentation. I would've liked to see some pictures from your past that applied to your life but I still liked your approach. It seemed a bit rushed though, I wish you had told more stories.
You have a very imaginative slideshow. Your theme is very fitting to you, and you included nice quotes throughout as well. You had some funny tidbits, and it added character to the presentation!
ReplyDeleteCaro - I liked your presentation. I liked the main theme of imagination. I would just work on not reading off your note card and looking at your audience more.
ReplyDeleteCaroline's words sounded very automatic, as if her her notes where presenting, not her. She took an interesting route, though, when she was the first to include pictures that imaged a artistic view of she had to say, standing out even though I wanted to see more pictures from her life.
ReplyDeleteYou did a nice job of showing how your imagination helped you get through life. I like the way you explained that the imagination can help people get through life.
ReplyDeleteGreat job, I really enjoyed your speech. You covered everything really well and I enjoyed listening to your talk. You have a great story. You really mixed it up and gave a new perspective. Though I would suggest not using a note card as much.
ReplyDeleteNext time you give a speech try not to just read of the note card. Overall fun presentation to listen to, it was fun to learn more about your life
ReplyDeleteCaro,
ReplyDeleteYour idea of imagination is awesome and I loved it. You kept your head down most of the time at your cards and would like more eye contact. Your speech was very good however and you did a great job.
Carolines presentation of quantic dreams was well spoken with a strong speech, she did a good job and told her things well
ReplyDeleteI loved that you chose imagination. It was a great new outlook on life and something that everyone could relate on! Maybe next time make more eye contact, but it was great!
ReplyDeleteCaro, your presentation is very you. Imagination is definitely the theme for your life. Good job on the delivery and posture, but make more eye contact
ReplyDeleteI liked the message of imagination through your speech. It felt as though the speech was kind of scripted, though, like a humble newscaster reading their morning news teleprompter.
ReplyDeleteCaro,
ReplyDeleteOther than eye contact you should speak more from within and not read off notecards, this speech should be kind of improvised so that you're not reading cards but you still got your point across in your quotes. I like what you said about peoples imaginations and how no one can have too many friends.
I love how you talk about imagination. I think people forget all the time that imagination is as important as knowledge. I think you have spent more time on your childhood and how that influences you now.
ReplyDeleteGood job presenting and speaking to the class.
ReplyDeleteGreat job, try not to read off your note cards so much next time. I like your pictures and your imagination piece in the presentation!
ReplyDeleteCaro, I absolutely loved your stories behind the theme of imagination. You got a very strong message across through your idea of what your lasting legacy will be. Short but to the point, and very inspirational.
ReplyDeleteGood ideas, but you read off of a notecard
ReplyDeleteGreat opening and the imagination topic was very enjoyable to listen too. Great job with the presentation.
ReplyDeleteCaro, I loved the name of your last lecture and how it began with a riddle. The running theme of imagination really tided your last lecture together as a whole. I think that your legacy to others is something that truly has come true in life for I know you have inspired me in quite a few ways. Next time I just recommend that you fake it till you make it if you mess up because no one knows but you!
ReplyDeleteGood ideas but needed more detail.
ReplyDeleteThe riddle that you began with was very interesting, and I like how that led into the rest of you presentation.I thought you had a very cool theme, and I like how your imagination is a big part of what shaped your personality. Great presentation.
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