I loved listening to your presentation, I wish you had some visuals but still very interesting!
Brendan:Even though you didn't have a presentation, you still painted a good picture. You had confidence but could've been a little more enthused. Your words were very eloquent though. Well done!
I would have really liked an image with your presentation, and I would have liked it to have been more about you than about the police metaphor.
Your presentation was really good! You were very confident about everything you said and I'm glad you put humor into your presentation. I also really liked how you mentioned your legacy in your presentation and it tied in very well.
I would have liked to see pictures with the presentation but I thought that you spoke well especially when you weren't using the note card as a crutch.
I like your explanation of what "leaving a legacy" means to you. Needed visuals but overall it was a good presentation
You related a lot of separate topics to you theme and really gave imagery of how you worked hard in high school. I would like to see visuals, but the imagery you gave helped.
I really like the quote that you used, that's a great inspiration to always have! And I agree with your idea of a legacy, great job!
The quotes you shared with us were very inspiring and the stories you told along side with them were very easy to listen too!
Brendan, you seemed very confident and talked loud and clear so nice job with that. Also I enjoyed your stories and learned a little more about what keeps you going. You could have incorporated pictures of your early years through now
Bringing in your experiences added a nice personal touch to your presentation. Your theme was exemplified well through your football talk.
Had no images or presentation to reference from, yet was very truthful through his experiences. Brendan's presence was somewhat stale, as well, and it took away how interesting his stories were because it effected how it was said.
Even though Brendan didn't have any background visuals, his strong voice and his speech still gave a good presentation with good quotes and stories, all in all Brendan did good
I enjoyed you message and the chance to understand you better. I thin your presentation should have been better with pictures to enhance your message.
Brendan, I love how you had the running theme of your goal of being a cop. I also really like how you incorporated quotes and important pieces of advice that you received over time. Next time I recommend that you try to not put your hand in your pocket.
Brendan, I really enjoyed listening to your speech and the different stories you told that describe how you've developed as a person. Visuals would have helped, but still very powerful. Nice job.
Pretty powerful speech. I liked the main ideas. I thought you had an interesting way of thinking of things.
Brendan,Your speech was great but maybe a little more eye contact and less looking at your cards but still good. I can really understand what your life was like.
Had a good theme of failing then making your way back every time and succeeding well said.
Brendan you are a funny man. I liked your presentation and i knew it came from the heart. Everything you talked about was personal and heart felt. People could relate to your presentation. You were fluent good job bud!
Brendan - I liked your common theme and how your shared your story. I'd just work on not reading off your note card as much and looking at your audience
Brendan...wow. What to say, what to say. Good Job. The Presentation had some powerful aspects that i took in as you spoke.
The ideas you were trying to deliver during your speech were good. It would have been good to have some visuals to help enhance your speech.
You did good putting your presentation together and leading up to the main point. You had some good stories that connected well with your main theme and legacy.
I really like that he opened up about being adopted and I think it is really cool how he was so comfortable talking to the class.
It would have been cool to see some pics, you know? But it was good, regardless, you were calm in your voice and presentation. It was like a graceful leaf, peacefully falling to the ground in autumn.
Very well spoken. You make good eye contact and its nice to hear that your able to admit what you have done wrong.