I loved how honest you were! You only glanced at your note card once or twice to get you back on track which was awesome! I loved hearing about your life. Good job!
Your presentation looks classy even form the first slide! Your dress is cute too. Your struggles with dyslexia were different, and must have been hard, but your presentation was very nice.
Brooke, Your speech was well done and you had my attention the whole time! Good job connecting your pictures on your presentation to your story they really helped put an image in my head.
You said some very captive moments that came and went, yet some where heard to hear based on how you said them, so it didn't come off as amazing as it should have been, but with that in mind you still had those moments that pulled it all together.
Brooke, I loved all your stories and all how you brought it all together. I love how you shared your story. You looked so confident and did a great job!
Brooke, I liked the visuals you used and how you said that you had pre-made friends when you were born. It was interesting to hear how you would wonder off on your own even in pretty populated areas. I liked that you described how your younger sister would read your homework for you and it was interesting to hear how hard it was for you to think something was wrong with you. I think it's amazing how far you have come and how smart you truly are. Next time I just recommend that you don't rely on your notes as much.
Great eye contact and steady voice during your presentation. You seemed so comfortable telling your story and expressing yourself. Good luck with fashion, you are very talented and keep following your dreams!
Brooke, I really loved how in depth you went with all the things you've done in your past, and how confident you are about the future. I know you're gonna shine.
You have a very unique childhood and I liked how you showed specific examples that related to your theme. I hope that you succeed and become a fashion designer, and never give up.
I loved how honest you were! You only glanced at your note card once or twice to get you back on track which was awesome! I loved hearing about your life. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYour presentation looks classy even form the first slide! Your dress is cute too. Your struggles with dyslexia were different, and must have been hard, but your presentation was very nice.
ReplyDeleteBrooke:
ReplyDeleteWell done, I liked all your pictures. Thank you for not putting in our church pictures. Seriously. ;)
Brooke,
ReplyDeleteit's really inspiring to hear about your struggle. You've done so much, and I'm amazed! Great job and super eye contact!!
presentation was very organized.Could have been a little more enthusiastic.
ReplyDeletegood to hear the story of your life.
Brooke,
ReplyDeleteYour speech was well done and you had my attention the whole time! Good job connecting your pictures on your presentation to your story they really helped put an image in my head.
I thought this was very well put together. I would of liked to see more eye contact but overall it was great!
ReplyDeleteVery organized and thought out. Maybe next time you give a presentation have a little more enthusiasm!!
ReplyDeleteYou said some very captive moments that came and went, yet some where heard to hear based on how you said them, so it didn't come off as amazing as it should have been, but with that in mind you still had those moments that pulled it all together.
ReplyDeleteBrooke,
ReplyDeleteI loved all your stories and all how you brought it all together. I love how you shared your story. You looked so confident and did a great job!
Brooke, I liked the visuals you used and how you said that you had pre-made friends when you were born. It was interesting to hear how you would wonder off on your own even in pretty populated areas. I liked that you described how your younger sister would read your homework for you and it was interesting to hear how hard it was for you to think something was wrong with you. I think it's amazing how far you have come and how smart you truly are. Next time I just recommend that you don't rely on your notes as much.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job, I liked learning about your life passions. You are like a female Giorgio Armani.
ReplyDeleteWell put together, and well delivered. Only suggestion is more enthusiasm
ReplyDeleteGreat eye contact and steady voice during your presentation. You seemed so comfortable telling your story and expressing yourself. Good luck with fashion, you are very talented and keep following your dreams!
ReplyDeleteI like how you told your story about how you moved around and how much your little sister helped you and how you liked cross country.
ReplyDeleteVery well organized, you delivered in a clear and concise manner.
ReplyDeleteBrooke, I really loved how in depth you went with all the things you've done in your past, and how confident you are about the future. I know you're gonna shine.
ReplyDeleteYou have a very unique childhood and I liked how you showed specific examples that related to your theme. I hope that you succeed and become a fashion designer, and never give up.
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