wow!! I loved listening to your story and learning about your birth parents, this was super cool and interesting to listen to.
Zach, you have a very interesting story and you presented it in a very good way. Clear and strong voice.
You had funny, cute, little jokes, which loosened up the speech. Your stories about adoption are touching and personal.
I loved your presentation. It was awesome to learn more about you. Very inspirational speech!!
Zach:Really good job! You had a great confidence and seemed very prepared. You didn't need a referrence card which was impressive.
It was way cool how vulnerable and open you were with the class about your adoption and meeting your birth parents. The stories you told you so fun and really showed who you were and are!
You had a lot of good stories and were very confident. I love how all your stories tied together. I liked hearing about your birth parents and life!
Zach was very impressive with how honest he was with his audience and didn't hold everything back. He seemed to have some trouble finding the words to pull it together, but still represented himself completely through open stories and beliefs.
Zach- I though you did a great job of looking at your audience and had great pictures and stories. You did a great job of sharing your story!
Zach,You grabbed my attention right away. Your story was very touching and you did a great job presenting your life. I think you should go meet your dad before you go to college but it's up to you.
Had a strong emotional opening was very easy to understand and follow. Good presentation.
Zach, I love how you had small amounts of humor throughout the presentation. I found it admirable that you are able to admit that you don't always have the answers to difficult things. I thought that you incorporating that very personal fact about the letter from your birth father really brave. Next time I just recommend that you take your hands out of your pockets.
Wore very professional attire. Shared personal experiences.You can tell he rehearsed his speech he was very fluent. Had fun when giving his speech. I liked listening to him.
I loved your story of growing up! And all your cute pictures of when you are little, great job!
I enjoyed your presentation. Your pictures went along well with what you were saying. I also liked your final message.
Good job making it very personal. it was a good speech and you looked confident
You gave a great speech that related to personal events and really showed how you live out the theme of your speech.
Very personal and very well done. Way to keep it light.
Zach...I thought your speech was great. Excellent performance.
I enjoyed your presentation, good job using eye contact. You were like an ever focused, determined business executive, leading an important meeting.
Zach had a great story, it was well memorized and well spoken. he did excellent job and I'm not saying that cause of the burritos
Zach, you did a nice job telling brief, informative stories and your voice was loud and clear. ONe thing you could have improved is you body language. Take your hands out of your pockets to seem more confident and big
You were very good at making eye contact and speaking eloquently. You were dressed very professionally and your transitions between slides were very smooth.
Zach, I really appreciate how open you were with the class about your life. It really gives the audience a good picture of who you are. Very personal. Awesome job.
You did great telling us about things from your past that may have been difficult for you talk about such emotional topics. Great job transitioning from topic to topic, and getting to the main points.