Based on first appearances and body language, Savannah seemed somewhat nervous to begin with. Told lots of stories, though, so the audience get a better sense of who she is.
Savannah did a good job with being thorough but her speech ran way too long. Also, she could've encorporated more stories.
Nice job connecting all of your pictures into your last lecture. You made it really easy to follow along with the stories.I also applaud you for being so vulnerable with the class about yourself and I really enjoyed hearing about your life.
I liked that you had visuals to go along with your stories. Thank you for being vulnerable with the class and opening up to us with your life.
Savannah, you present your information very well and made it interesting throughout the whole presentation. For your next presentation I recommend that you don't move around as much and try to keep the hair brushing back to a minimum. I loved all the different kinds of visuals you used as you spoke.
There seems to be a lot of stories, I think it would have been better to focus on the main meat of the speech instead of all the back round stories. Overall good body language and such.
It must've been difficult to open up to the entire class about your past and your struggles; Your slides really added to the presentation. Over all, it was very personal, and good job!
You did a very good job in the way you presented your project.
Savannah has some interesting stories and some great points. I think that she could have tied them together better to create a stronger messages.
I think Savannah did really well for the first presenter. I was very interested in her life and how she coped with her depression. She's an inspiration.
Very well spoken, with good eye contact. Nice visuals. Thank you for sharing personal information with confidence and nice job keeping on topic. You are a very good speaker.
I think you did a good job with the presentation aspect of this project. Your presentation was well planned out and you did not look nervous at all. However, i was kind of confused on the main idea of your presentation.
Great job being the first person! You're story is touching and I'm glad that you have found such a wonderful group of friends in band and at Arapahoe. Thanks for sharing and opening up!
Savannah,You did an excellent job with putting an image of your life in my mind even though you went a little bit over your time it was a good presentation. Good job.
presentation was very well put together. Lots of pictures provided good examples of what her life was like growing up. I thought she was fairly fluent and had read over her speech to herself a couple times. Overall a good job.
Savannah had thorough stories, but they ran a little long. More stories, but shorter and more to the point. Also seemed a little nervous at first, but got better
I really enjoyed seeing all the visuals you had, also hearing about the stories that went with them.
Savannah - Great presentation! I loved how you were so willing to share your story and the things that you have struggled with. I would just work on focusing on the main point more than the stories :)
Savannah did well as a first presenter, she said a little to many ums but her strong stories kept the attention, it was also well planned out with good visuals
Savannah was very good at running through her stories; however her body language was timid and she faced away from the class. Overall, the presentation would have been more enjoyable if she didn't say "um" as much.
Savannah, Awesome pictures in your presentation I wish there was more time to hear about your life. A little advice, you could have used more eye contact when talking to the class, i could see in the body language that you seemed nervous but thats okay, you did well.
Savannah did a wonderful job elaborating on all her pictures, and we found out more about who she was as a younger child before she moved to CO. It seemed that moving to CO was a big change in her life. Savannah went a little bit over the time limit but she did well on wrapping up her legacy by saying good memories lead to recovery.
Savannah, you had a very informative presentation that did a good job of going through your life to this point. I think something you could work on is trying to be more comfortable in front of people. You still did a nice job of getting your point across.
Great presentation. You did a good job explaining your childhood, had a lot of good stories. You did a very good job sharing about the getting past the hard times in your life.
I really enjoyed all the pictures you incorporated into your presentation. I think a little more eye contact could have brought this up another level.
You had a lot of stories in your presentation, maybe connect it to the back to the main point a little bit more
Savannah you did a great job of presenting your story's in an interesting calm manner. You opened up your story's in an easy way to follow.
I enjoyed the stories, but your body language could have been a little more confident, and more eye contact.