tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post9089911158370225998..comments2023-06-19T09:59:25.329-06:00Comments on Smith EWL 12-13: Savannah Aanneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-37529637318509321552013-05-13T07:51:30.603-06:002013-05-13T07:51:30.603-06:00I enjoyed the stories, but your body language coul...I enjoyed the stories, but your body language could have been a little more confident, and more eye contact.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-7155096238026724902013-05-13T07:43:21.211-06:002013-05-13T07:43:21.211-06:00Savannah you did a great job of presenting your st...Savannah you did a great job of presenting your story's in an interesting calm manner. You opened up your story's in an easy way to follow.Justin Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10236108625951880575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-11969921123388708882013-05-13T07:42:57.631-06:002013-05-13T07:42:57.631-06:00Savannah you did a great job of presenting your st...Savannah you did a great job of presenting your story's in an interesting calm manner. You opened up your story's in an easy way to follow.Justin Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10236108625951880575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-12042714632115980792013-05-13T07:40:29.187-06:002013-05-13T07:40:29.187-06:00You had a lot of stories in your presentation, may...You had a lot of stories in your presentation, maybe connect it to the back to the main point a little bit moreAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-77284162715419778882013-05-13T07:39:09.918-06:002013-05-13T07:39:09.918-06:00I really enjoyed all the pictures you incorporated...I really enjoyed all the pictures you incorporated into your presentation. I think a little more eye contact could have brought this up another level.allieb2013https://www.blogger.com/profile/16645975715908087176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-85303111328802824192013-05-13T07:39:05.092-06:002013-05-13T07:39:05.092-06:00I really enjoyed all the pictures you incorporated...I really enjoyed all the pictures you incorporated into your presentation. I think a little more eye contact could have brought this up another level.allieb2013https://www.blogger.com/profile/16645975715908087176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-69316761129120595812013-05-13T07:38:05.358-06:002013-05-13T07:38:05.358-06:00Great presentation. You did a good job explaining ...Great presentation. You did a good job explaining your childhood, had a lot of good stories. You did a very good job sharing about the getting past the hard times in your life.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-10287707952234953522013-05-13T07:36:10.922-06:002013-05-13T07:36:10.922-06:00Savannah, you had a very informative presentation ...Savannah, you had a very informative presentation that did a good job of going through your life to this point. I think something you could work on is trying to be more comfortable in front of people. You still did a nice job of getting your point across.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12064655241395895984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-76664698055809298222013-05-13T07:35:26.171-06:002013-05-13T07:35:26.171-06:00Savannah did a wonderful job elaborating on all he...Savannah did a wonderful job elaborating on all her pictures, and we found out more about who she was as a younger child before she moved to CO. It seemed that moving to CO was a big change in her life. Savannah went a little bit over the time limit but she did well on wrapping up her legacy by saying good memories lead to recovery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-74768174134652597492013-05-13T07:35:05.926-06:002013-05-13T07:35:05.926-06:00Savannah, Awesome pictures in your presentation I ...Savannah, Awesome pictures in your presentation I wish there was more time to hear about your life. A little advice, you could have used more eye contact when talking to the class, i could see in the body language that you seemed nervous but thats okay, you did well.tpetriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13207387500308523511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-17459907430563347612013-05-13T07:34:47.253-06:002013-05-13T07:34:47.253-06:00Savannah was very good at running through her stor...Savannah was very good at running through her stories; however her body language was timid and she faced away from the class. Overall, the presentation would have been more enjoyable if she didn't say "um" as much. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09158639594964957765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-77430006712715963222013-05-13T07:34:30.707-06:002013-05-13T07:34:30.707-06:00Savannah did well as a first presenter, she said a...Savannah did well as a first presenter, she said a little to many ums but her strong stories kept the attention, it was also well planned out with good visualsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-9796257188652420982013-05-13T07:34:11.192-06:002013-05-13T07:34:11.192-06:00Savannah - Great presentation! I loved how you we...Savannah - Great presentation! I loved how you were so willing to share your story and the things that you have struggled with. I would just work on focusing on the main point more than the stories :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-43308834256253068222013-05-13T07:34:06.386-06:002013-05-13T07:34:06.386-06:00I really enjoyed seeing all the visuals you had, a...I really enjoyed seeing all the visuals you had, also hearing about the stories that went with them. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18024940649300042602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-7734552920956016122013-05-13T07:33:33.174-06:002013-05-13T07:33:33.174-06:00Savannah had thorough stories, but they ran a litt...Savannah had thorough stories, but they ran a little long. More stories, but shorter and more to the point. Also seemed a little nervous at first, but got betterJason Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01262064643633693472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-23893420847704650602013-05-13T07:33:17.805-06:002013-05-13T07:33:17.805-06:00presentation was very well put together. Lots of p...presentation was very well put together. Lots of pictures provided good examples of what her life was like growing up. I thought she was fairly fluent and had read over her speech to herself a couple times. Overall a good job.coltonn13https://www.blogger.com/profile/10590750841918073221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-5464380930018364692013-05-13T07:33:14.229-06:002013-05-13T07:33:14.229-06:00Savannah,
You did an excellent job with putting an...Savannah,<br />You did an excellent job with putting an image of your life in my mind even though you went a little bit over your time it was a good presentation. Good job.LucChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15028675798358841984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-8245815101043551662013-05-13T07:33:01.195-06:002013-05-13T07:33:01.195-06:00Great job being the first person! You're story...Great job being the first person! You're story is touching and I'm glad that you have found such a wonderful group of friends in band and at Arapahoe. Thanks for sharing and opening up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-32711362920529233532013-05-13T07:32:52.507-06:002013-05-13T07:32:52.507-06:00I think you did a good job with the presentation a...I think you did a good job with the presentation aspect of this project. Your presentation was well planned out and you did not look nervous at all. However, i was kind of confused on the main idea of your presentation. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-57181145115836318022013-05-13T07:32:49.786-06:002013-05-13T07:32:49.786-06:00Very well spoken, with good eye contact. Nice visu...Very well spoken, with good eye contact. Nice visuals. Thank you for sharing personal information with confidence and nice job keeping on topic. You are a very good speaker.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-78683748687035045522013-05-13T07:32:38.711-06:002013-05-13T07:32:38.711-06:00I think Savannah did really well for the first pre...I think Savannah did really well for the first presenter. I was very interested in her life and how she coped with her depression. She's an inspiration. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-12166413924747215892013-05-13T07:32:14.570-06:002013-05-13T07:32:14.570-06:00Savannah has some interesting stories and some gre...Savannah has some interesting stories and some great points. I think that she could have tied them together better to create a stronger messages.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-6911462566977251852013-05-13T07:32:11.101-06:002013-05-13T07:32:11.101-06:00You did a very good job in the way you presented y...You did a very good job in the way you presented your project.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-63558481080937016052013-05-13T07:32:07.117-06:002013-05-13T07:32:07.117-06:00It must've been difficult to open up to the en...It must've been difficult to open up to the entire class about your past and your struggles; Your slides really added to the presentation. Over all, it was very personal, and good job!JennaS2014https://www.blogger.com/profile/15076306461009263747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-40878506976840926212013-05-13T07:32:02.703-06:002013-05-13T07:32:02.703-06:00There seems to be a lot of stories, I think it wou...There seems to be a lot of stories, I think it would have been better to focus on the main meat of the speech instead of all the back round stories. Overall good body language and such.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com