I liked how you grabbed everyone's attention before you began. You have a very powerful story. If you want to make a difference tell it again and again.
Tristan, You look great first of all. Very touching story Tristan is was very easy to listen to and the description of your childhood really put an image in my head. Very great job!
Tristan: Incredible. It took a lot of bravery to say all those things about your past. Your story is inspiring and you executed your presentation perfectly. Very powerful.
Your intention for your introduction was obviously seen to be strong and powerful so your audience had to understand the full extent of how serious your experiences were caught my attention and helped me feel the most emotion in your lecture.
Tristan, I liked how you started off with putting your manifesto on the board as your visual. I had no idea that you grew up and came from such a hard family life. I was so glad to hear that your fathers side of the family was such a safe haven for you in your life. I think that you are one of the most forgiving and gracious person to think that the people who have hurt you so badly are still good people in the end. Next time I just recommend that you don't move around as much.
I LOVE YOU MAN! i know some of that was hard for you to talk about,but i am happy you did so.Thisspeech was very heart felt. and thank you for sharing.
Your speech was fantastic. Your stories were hard to tell but you did with such a level head. Your confidence level was through the roof. It was a very powerful and melancholic speech.
Great job engaging your audience! You had a very personal powerful story and you did a wonderful job sharing it. Also good job at making eye contact and not reading from your notes cards, it shows how prepared you were.
Amazing job, you were spot on in your delivery of your ideas. Passion is the one thing you need to have in life, because if your not passionate about what your doing in life, then your not living. Great job.
Tristan, that was an awesome speech that really reached deep into your life and showed us how you become who you are today. I wish you the best and I am sure that you will become the person you want to be and be proud of who you are.
You spoke very well and was compassionate. I really enjoyed this presentation
ReplyDeleteI liked how you grabbed everyone's attention before you began. You have a very powerful story. If you want to make a difference tell it again and again.
ReplyDeleteThanks for showing vulnerability in sharing some very personal things. Great job!
ReplyDeleteTristan,
ReplyDeleteYou look great first of all. Very touching story Tristan is was very easy to listen to and the description of your childhood really put an image in my head. Very great job!
Tristan:
ReplyDeleteIncredible. It took a lot of bravery to say all those things about your past. Your story is inspiring and you executed your presentation perfectly. Very powerful.
I liked how much of your past you are willing to tell us the truth. It is hard to tell but you are willing to share your story with us.
ReplyDeleteYour intention for your introduction was obviously seen to be strong and powerful so your audience had to understand the full extent of how serious your experiences were caught my attention and helped me feel the most emotion in your lecture.
ReplyDeleteTristan, I liked how you started off with putting your manifesto on the board as your visual. I had no idea that you grew up and came from such a hard family life. I was so glad to hear that your fathers side of the family was such a safe haven for you in your life. I think that you are one of the most forgiving and gracious person to think that the people who have hurt you so badly are still good people in the end. Next time I just recommend that you don't move around as much.
ReplyDeleteThe faith you have in your mom and stepdad is very admirable after everything. You shared a lot, making the speech personal and rather touching
ReplyDeleteTristan,
ReplyDeleteI love how personal and how willing you were to tell your story. Just like your manifesto said, your speech was full of passion. Great job!
Nice job, I agree with living to the fullest. You are like someone who has been enlightened to what he really wants in life.
ReplyDeleteGreat job, I agree with your ideas about passion and your delivery was very confident calm and well done.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE YOU MAN! i know some of that was hard for you to talk about,but i am happy you did so.Thisspeech was very heart felt. and thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteYour speech was fantastic. Your stories were hard to tell but you did with such a level head. Your confidence level was through the roof. It was a very powerful and melancholic speech.
ReplyDeleteGreat job engaging your audience! You had a very personal powerful story and you did a wonderful job sharing it. Also good job at making eye contact and not reading from your notes cards, it shows how prepared you were.
ReplyDeleteAmazing job, you were spot on in your delivery of your ideas. Passion is the one thing you need to have in life, because if your not passionate about what your doing in life, then your not living. Great job.
ReplyDeleteTristan, that was an awesome speech that really reached deep into your life and showed us how you become who you are today. I wish you the best and I am sure that you will become the person you want to be and be proud of who you are.
ReplyDeleteWore professional attire very confident in hisspeech and was fun to listen to. You did a good job at about telling your life story.
ReplyDeleteTristan, that was a fantastic speech that was so deep and showed your incredible inner strength. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteTristan, that was a fantastic speech that was so deep and showed your incredible inner strength. Very well done.
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