Alli, I liked how you brought in books and how they were with you through all of the hard times. I like how truthful you were and how honest. I really liked your story! Great job!
Allie, I loved the way you started with your old house and where you grew up. I like how you would use books to get away from bullies and distractions you had and used reading to leave the bullies out of your way and got them to stop. Very good presentation.
Allie, you seemed a little nervous at first, but you turned it around. I liked your quote about risk and glad that you were able to fly. Great job on your presentation overall
What you said sometimes somewhat came off shy, so my attention wasn't always on you, yet you still provided a strong, building lecture that I overall enjoyed.
Allie, I liked how you explain how you couldn't always play with someone so you turned to books. I loved how you explained that you took joy and a safe haven in the fictional worlds you loved so much. I was so terribly sorry to hear that you had been so badly bullied in earlier years. I liked the way you viewed risks and how you truly embrace them. Next time, I just recommend that you relax a little more when you talk and don't be quite so nervous.
Since reading had such an influence in your life, it was cool to relate books, like Coraline, to your life. I liked the way your presentation flowed from one idea to the next, as well!
You really put yourself out there and did a great job! That was a very nice speech with a great message. I am glad that you thrived in high school and I'm sure your success with continue throughout the rest of your life.
I loved your pictures! You spoke well and seemed prepared as well
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you brought in books and how they were with you through all of the hard times. I like how truthful you were and how honest. I really liked your story! Great job!
I love how you tied in reading! You were very vulnerable and open! I love that books have given you so many good memories! Good Job!
ReplyDeleteAllie,
ReplyDeleteI loved the way you started with your old house and where you grew up. I like how you would use books to get away from bullies and distractions you had and used reading to leave the bullies out of your way and got them to stop. Very good presentation.
Allie, you seemed a little nervous at first, but you turned it around. I liked your quote about risk and glad that you were able to fly. Great job on your presentation overall
ReplyDeleteWhat you said sometimes somewhat came off shy, so my attention wasn't always on you, yet you still provided a strong, building lecture that I overall enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteAllie:
ReplyDeleteYour story was really inspiring. I loved the quote "sometimes when you fall, you fly." Lovely job.
Allie, I liked how you explain how you couldn't always play with someone so you turned to books. I loved how you explained that you took joy and a safe haven in the fictional worlds you loved so much. I was so terribly sorry to hear that you had been so badly bullied in earlier years. I liked the way you viewed risks and how you truly embrace them. Next time, I just recommend that you relax a little more when you talk and don't be quite so nervous.
ReplyDeleteA little nervous at first, but you became more confidence the further you got into your speech. The quote about risk was awesome. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story. You seemed at little nervous but you did a great job. I also liked your message of taking care of one another.
ReplyDeleteI Like how you would tell us about your favorite books and how you took risks and how it made you fly. How you told us to take care of someone
ReplyDeleteSince reading had such an influence in your life, it was cool to relate books, like Coraline, to your life. I liked the way your presentation flowed from one idea to the next, as well!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed learning about your experiences, you are a noble scholar.
ReplyDeleteGood job getting personal and vulnerable. You looked very confident and i think you are a very good person.
ReplyDeleteYou really put yourself out there and did a great job! That was a very nice speech with a great message. I am glad that you thrived in high school and I'm sure your success with continue throughout the rest of your life.
ReplyDeletegood job. Thank you for sharing those stories with us. i liked your stories about adventuras reading.
ReplyDeleteGreat presentation! It has to be hard sharing such a personal topic but you did an amazing job.
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