tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post7637041416906630452..comments2023-06-19T09:59:25.329-06:00Comments on Smith EWL 12-13: Trevor Panneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-23041456388020789512013-05-15T08:04:35.438-06:002013-05-15T08:04:35.438-06:00I liked your intro it was a good attention grabber...I liked your intro it was a good attention grabber. It was well rehearsed. It was awesome to hear more of your life story. Try to stand still more. Overall very well doneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-3253466932738738842013-05-15T08:04:16.339-06:002013-05-15T08:04:16.339-06:00I really respect you for opening up in front of th...I really respect you for opening up in front of the class and showing how you are learning from the mistakes you made in the past and putting them behind you! People can change and I really encourage you to do the best you can at everything and I'm sure you will develop into a very good man.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12064655241395895984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-63872038972810699312013-05-15T08:03:18.121-06:002013-05-15T08:03:18.121-06:00Trevor, to begin I loved how professionally you lo...Trevor, to begin I loved how professionally you looked and I loved how you didn't have a presentation it made your speech unique as well as special. I liked how you used definitions of the word that really meant the most to you in your life. I also liked how you put truly personal information into your speech it really made me see the real you. Next time just try not to walk around as much. AddieChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15187766635871443112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-49249970493378978612013-05-15T08:03:17.195-06:002013-05-15T08:03:17.195-06:00Trevor,
I like your idea about presentation being ...Trevor,<br />I like your idea about presentation being a distraction to what your trying to tell. Your change theme was awesome and I like the way you would accept change and embrace it. Your story was very good!LucChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15028675798358841984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-20628722956742606272013-05-15T08:03:16.437-06:002013-05-15T08:03:16.437-06:00Your shirt is a nice color. The contrast between ...Your shirt is a nice color. The contrast between your definition and the dictionary was a cool touch. You shared such a personal stories, which must've been a hard thing to do. Hopefully now you're growing as a person! JennaS2014https://www.blogger.com/profile/15076306461009263747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-65294112098587977342013-05-15T08:02:44.894-06:002013-05-15T08:02:44.894-06:00It was very deep and I liked you delivered it diff...It was very deep and I liked you delivered it differently then everyone else. You could tell it was very personal which is a great touch! SavannahR2013https://www.blogger.com/profile/09631861230354058143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-74580404509582249662013-05-15T08:02:38.556-06:002013-05-15T08:02:38.556-06:00I could tell you were really relaxed and comfortab...I could tell you were really relaxed and comfortable giving your speech. Great job, I like how you went about your theme. You got into some really vulnerable topics, and gave a great presentation. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-29917329385634082702013-05-15T08:02:28.854-06:002013-05-15T08:02:28.854-06:00Good job telling a story, you had solid points and...Good job telling a story, you had solid points and ideas and i liked how you moved around.It kept the crowd enthused. You created a good sense of vulnerability which made it easier for me to connect with you. One thing to work on in possibly making eye contact with the crowd more, you looked at the floor for about 60% of you presentation. But other than that nice job. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-14280960260589400632013-05-15T08:02:16.405-06:002013-05-15T08:02:16.405-06:00Trevor i agree with you 100% change for the most p...Trevor i agree with you 100% change for the most part is a good thing. Good job presenting it. Justin Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10236108625951880575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-17361959100166609282013-05-15T08:02:06.649-06:002013-05-15T08:02:06.649-06:00Trevor - I love how personal your presentation was...Trevor - I love how personal your presentation was. you were so honest and so willing to share. I liked how you didn't need to have a PowerPoint but were confident in what you were saying. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-17031286753178974432013-05-15T08:02:05.146-06:002013-05-15T08:02:05.146-06:00I like how you choose not to use pictures or anyth...I like how you choose not to use pictures or anything but yourself to explain your life. I also liked how you used change to explain yourself and your life.Jeffreyrohdehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00424944026631511801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-17849262334173905542013-05-15T08:01:53.645-06:002013-05-15T08:01:53.645-06:00I loved how you didn't use any pictures. It se...I loved how you didn't use any pictures. It seemed crazy at first but it really worked for you. You spoke exactly like a professional speaker! I liked how confident you were and honest. I think your speech was the best overall. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-36899679590234393012013-05-15T08:01:43.333-06:002013-05-15T08:01:43.333-06:00even though you didn't have a presentation you...even though you didn't have a presentation you did a good job getting your message across to your audience. Your personality came across very strong and it was good to see that you were not afraid to tell a personal story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-27495737733173342052013-05-15T08:01:32.800-06:002013-05-15T08:01:32.800-06:00Standing closer to the audience than most presente...Standing closer to the audience than most presenters gave and instant positive and confident feeling for the lecture. Not providing images and slides to reference from was interesting, yet because you didn't want anyone to be distracted from what you trying to convey gave larger, impressive stance. Ava Kalhoeferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14057738102994111713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-54630480213183620712013-05-15T08:00:27.446-06:002013-05-15T08:00:27.446-06:00I like how you talked about change through the who...I like how you talked about change through the whole presentation. You were super easy to focus on with a clear confident voice. Your stories were very personal but made your presentation that much better, good job sharing and being open with the class.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-47082990153940990982013-05-15T08:00:08.452-06:002013-05-15T08:00:08.452-06:00Way to pace, and using your hands, this added to y...Way to pace, and using your hands, this added to your speech. YOU not having pictures behind you did make your speech better, because sometimes, people will focus on your pictures more than what you were actually saying. Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-31310052669686663352013-05-15T07:59:59.102-06:002013-05-15T07:59:59.102-06:00I really like how you talked with your hands and m...I really like how you talked with your hands and moved around. You kept us really engaged and listening by your talking, I like that you didn't need pictures.Morgan Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07144957271542277156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-82102542732207865402013-05-15T07:59:48.047-06:002013-05-15T07:59:48.047-06:00Trevor, you did well not having a presentation, it...Trevor, you did well not having a presentation, it engaged you in the audience but you could of had better eye contact but good jobAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-29728065257298520792013-05-15T07:59:39.234-06:002013-05-15T07:59:39.234-06:00An interesting take on the presentation. Your choi...An interesting take on the presentation. Your choice not to have pictures made the listeners pay attention to what you were saying, an stronger impact. Your movements were kind of distracting from the presentation. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-77365678687750915442013-05-15T07:59:23.591-06:002013-05-15T07:59:23.591-06:00gave a different speech from everyone else and was...gave a different speech from everyone else and was confident doing it. Thought he could have rehearsed his speech a little more. but it was heart felt and had meaning to it. shared deep family issues. GREAT JOB TREV!! YOU THE MANcoltonn13https://www.blogger.com/profile/10590750841918073221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-86725645245366292372013-05-15T07:59:18.639-06:002013-05-15T07:59:18.639-06:00You seemed very confident and comfortable in what ...You seemed very confident and comfortable in what you were talking about, very genuine.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-32691046090484969052013-05-15T07:59:09.919-06:002013-05-15T07:59:09.919-06:00Not having a slide show did make me focus on what ...Not having a slide show did make me focus on what you were saying more! Good job!Jackiekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16544021972303285791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-81305268926910133752013-05-15T07:59:08.187-06:002013-05-15T07:59:08.187-06:00Trevor, I liked how you did it differently, simila...Trevor, I liked how you did it differently, similar to a TED talk. You were very confident and calm up there. I liked your stories and you did a great jobJason Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01262064643633693472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-57751178356376415982013-05-15T07:58:55.556-06:002013-05-15T07:58:55.556-06:00You spoke very well and very confident! Great life...You spoke very well and very confident! Great life lessons and the connection to changeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18024940649300042602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6157317432732124044.post-6900050275643942832013-05-15T07:58:31.230-06:002013-05-15T07:58:31.230-06:00Trevor:
It was cool how you had a reason to not ha...Trevor:<br />It was cool how you had a reason to not have a presentation. I like how you were engaged in the audience. Eye contact could've improved but I love how you had the theme of change. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14362728759455698671noreply@blogger.com