Monday, May 13, 2013

Elle W


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28 comments:

  1. Eleanor:
    WE LIVED IN THE SAME NEIGHBORHOOD STOP OH MY GOSH NAPERVILLE TWINS. Anyways, good presentation. You were very prepared and really got your point across. Good eye contact! It's incredible how much you've overcome. Good job Eleanor.

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  2. You were dressed very well but I wish that you weren't glued to your note cards as you spoke.

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  3. Your experiences connected to your theme very nicely, which you kept throughout the speech nicely. Your manifesto also had nice quotes in it.

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  4. Stuck to a good common theme throughout the whole speech. With great stories that tied into the main theme of the story. Good job not just reading off the note cards.

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  5. I think you did a great job! You were very confident and barely looked at your notecards! Good job!

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  6. You did great. You did seem nervous at all. I liked your theme of adversary. It brings a message of hope to others.

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  7. Elle, I liked the visuals that you used and picked for the presentation. I loved how you really kept your theme up throughout the whole presentation. Next time I just recommend that you move a little less as you present. I also really enjoyed your manifesto quotes.

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  8. Well rehearsed speech seemed like you had fun giving. God job presenting on all 3 points

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  9. I really liked the theme of adversity. It was easy to understand and relate too. Your manifesto was put together really well, I loved the quotes.

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  10. You are a confident speaker and you have good eye contact. You shared personal information with us and you were confident wiht a strong voice. Nice way to end your presentation with quotes about what you believe in.

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  11. Was very clear and easy to follow your story's. Interesting and well said presentation, and I really liked the quote "the struggle is a part of the story".

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  12. I liked how you told us about the things that were a big influence to you, and what helped you get through the things you struggled with.

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  13. I really liked your manifesto and how you went through some of the quotes. Overall great presentation and speech.

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  14. Elle
    I wish you would have told us more about how you progressed through high school, other than cheer. It is very cool that you became captain of the cheer team because at that time your team was under adversity, and you led the team well obviously since you guys were the division champs at UCA. Over all very good voice and you speak with confidence. I like your idea about dealing with adversity to overcome things.

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  15. Elle - I loved your confidence and the main theme. I liked all the pictures and all the stories. I thought it was great!

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  16. Elle, I love how passionate you were with what you talked about, it really put a mental image into the minds of the audience of who you are and how you react to different obstacles. Good presentation overall.

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  17. Good job!! You had good ideas and looked very confident

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  18. It was inspiring to hear how mush Elle went through just to show some instances when not all stories are so lighthearted yet conveyed her struggles. Her only faults where speaking ans putting sentences through a flowing pattern.

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  19. wore professional attire. Gave a fluent speech. HAd fun while giving it. She had rehearsed her speech. Good job.

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  20. Elle, you did a very nice job keeping your posture and staying confident. I liked hearing how you overcame adversity and left a legacy

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  21. You seemed really confident, but I would have liked it a bit better if you hadn't been so glued to your note cards.

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  22. Great job! I like the common theme you had throughout your presentation.

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  23. Your ideas were good and you presented them in a clear and concise way

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  24. Elle,
    Your presentation was very well prepared. I liked your theme of adversity. Way to end with a quote that was very good. You kept everyone's attention the whole time great job.

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  25. Elle's speech was good, she spoke strongly and was confident, her visuals helped her presentation to make the story stronger

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  26. You did a good job making the overall theme clear throughout the whole thing. Your speech was like a still, crystal clear lake, letting us see through to the theme at the bottom.

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  27. I like how you showed that bad things in life make you grow as a person and get stronger.

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  28. She could of had rehearsed her speech a little better. But enjoyed listening to it. GOOD JOB!!!

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